3.1 Summary Writing● what is summary? A
Summary is a record in the reader’s own words that gives the main points of a
piece such as a newspaper, article, a lecture, a passage, a chapter or even a whole book.
ICE BREAKERSA1:- Discuss in pairs and guess the correct alternative
for the following.
1. To summarize means...................................
(a) Put
information in chronological order
(b) To recapitulate
the main points in selection
(c) To introduce new information
(d) To write one’s opinion about selection
Ans:- (b) To recapitulate the main points in selection.
2.
The type of summary that consists of a paragraph to express the main idea is.............................. (a) Outline (b) Report (c) Synopsis (d) Written summaryAns:- (d) Written summary
A2:- There are various ways of incorporating other
writers’ works into your own writing. They differ according to the closeness
of your writing to the source writing. Match the ways of writing in brief given
in column (A) with their descriptions in column (B)
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Sr. no. |
(A) Ways
of writing |
|
(B)
Descriptions |
|
1 |
Summarizing |
a |
It includes not just the main idea but every detail expressed clearly and to the point. |
|
2 |
Paraphrasing |
b |
It includes selection of proper lines from the given text for correction, condensation and organization. |
|
3 |
Précis writing |
c |
It includes the most
essential part or the crux of the matter. |
|
4 |
Quoting |
d |
It includes taking broader segment of the source and condensing it slightly. |
|
5 |
Editing |
e |
It includes main ideas into
one’s own words. |
|
6 |
Gist writing |
f |
It must be identical to the original and match the document word by word. |
|
Sr. no. |
(A) Ways
of writing |
|
(B)
Descriptions |
|
1 |
Summarizing |
e |
It includes main ideas into
one’s own words. |
|
2 |
Paraphrasing |
f |
It must be identical to the original and match the document word by word. |
|
3 |
Précis writing |
d |
It includes taking broader segment of the source and condensing it slightly. |
|
4 |
Quoting |
a |
It includes not just the main idea but every detail expressed clearly and to the point. |
|
5 |
Editing |
b |
It includes selection of proper lines from the given text forcorrection, condensation and organization. |
|
6 |
Gist writing |
c |
It includes the most
essential part or the crux of the matter. |
Read the passage and write its summary according to the given steps.
Step 2: The purpose of writing -To tell the reader about the interesting communication methods among birds and mammals.
Steps 4: Write the first draft: Revise your first draft and edit it.
Step 5: Write the final draft (Given overleaf)
Title : Singing birds and mammals We communicate
with one another in different ways. Similarly, animals
also communicate! They sing
and interact with others of their kind. Male blackbirds use their sweet voice to catch the
attention of females. These songs vary in notes
and thus convey different messages. The songs
also warn other blackbirds off from the area. Like
birds, sea mammals also sing. Big whales groan
and grunt; dolphins and porpoises make pings,
whistles and clicks. These sounds reach their
mates who are kilometres away!
(A2) (i) Cut redundant
words:
We’re often inefficient in our language,
using more words than necessary. Consider the following phrases. Find five more redundant words.
(a) “Circle around” can become “circle.” (b) “Write W down” can become “write.”
(c) “Added bonus” is simply a
“bonus.” (d) “Get to the point as quickly as possible”
is really “get to the point.”
(e) “Close proximity” is “close.” (f) “During the
course of” is “during.” Ans:(1) puzzling mystery = 'mystery' (2) connect together = 'connect’(3) divide into two equal halves = 'divide into halves’ (4) surrounded on all sides = 'surrounded'(5) return back = 'return'
(c) “Added bonus” is simply a “bonus.”
(e) “Close proximity” is “close.”
(ii) Avoid adverbs:
Adverbs clutter up your copy. You can
usually live without them. Here are some examples.
(a) “That’s usually a good thing to
do.”
(iii) One word
substitution:
One word substitutes are words that replace
a group of words or a full sentence effectively without creating any ambiguity in the meaning of the sentences.
(a) The life story of man
written by himself: autobiography
(A3) (i) Use of noun in
apposition:
Apposition is a grammatical
construction in which two elements, normally noun phrases, are placed side by
side, with one element serving to identify the other
in a different way; the two elements are said to be in apposition. Apposition
can be used to make the compound sentences short and
simple. Ex. Neha is their eldest child and she is
very intelligent. - Neha, their eldest child, is very
intelligent. [Here, Neha and their eldest child are the same person.]
(ii) Transforming
Complex to Simple: By using phrases like 'too ….. to' or using nouns\ phrase
instead of a clause:Ex. Nagpur is the city where oranges grow.
- Oranges grow in Nagpur.
The old man is so weak that he
cannot walk.
- The old man is too weak to walk.
Change the following sentences into
simple:
(a) Mr Rohit is the member and he is also the director.
Ans:- Mr Rohit is the member and
also the director.
(b) The room is so small that it cannot accommodate many people.
Ans:- The room is
too small to accommodate many people.
(c) You have to prove Y that you are innocent.
Ans:- You have to prove your innocence.
(d) He was late so he walked in a great hurry.
Ans:- Being late, he walked
in a great hurry.
- Oranges grow in Nagpur.
The old man is so weak that he cannot walk.
- The old man is too weak to walk.
(a) Mr Rohit is the member and he is also the director.
Ans:- Mr Rohit is the member and also the director.
Ans:- The room is too small to accommodate many people.
Ans:- You have to prove your innocence.
Ans:- Being late, he walked in a great hurry.
